Note with flowers?

I've decided to send this girl I've liked since school started some flowers with a note. I really like her a lot, and I'm not sure how she feels. I was wondering if anyone had some tips on making these ideas into a note that sounds... better?





"I can't keep it to myself anymore, so I'll just tell you. I think that you're the coolest, most beautiful girl that I've ever met. When you smile at me, it makes the entire world seem like a better place. I just wanted to let you know how I feel and that I think about you all the time. I would love more than anything to take you out to dinner, if you would let me."





I don't know whether to ask if she feels the same way in the note, I feel like I'm putting it all on the line doing this. Any help would be awesome. I'm new at this, because shes the first girl I really feel this way about.

Note with flowers?
What a wonderful gentleman you are! And, how thoughtful you are, too. First of all, you wear your heart on your sleeve, which isn't bad and don't take it as such. It just means that you pour your heart out and say what you mean. Never apologize for telling someone how you feel. You just may need a little smoothing out a bit. You have asked for a little advice, so here goes. I wouldn't even say the word "I" to her, if you can help it, because that would be focusing on yourself, and you want to focus on HER. So, let's start out by deleting the first sentence. The second sentence is right on! The next to the last sentence could be construed as an obsession by you admitting that you "think about her all of the time," so we'll change that a ltitle bit.





I would phrase the note as,





You are the most beautiful girl that I've ever met. When you smile at me, it makes the entire world seem like a better place. Whether you are near me, or far away, you are on my mind. I would love more than anything to take you out to dinner. Say "Yes" and make me the happiest man on Earth.





(and sign your name)





I hope things go well for you. You deserve the best!
Reply:That's kind of what liking someone is about. You put your heart out there and you know they return your feelings when they accept your dinner invitation. Good luck! I love the note. Very romantic.
Reply:i think your putting the whole we are meant to be together for ever spin on it too much, you might scare her off a little bit. I think the beginning is good id just take our the smiling bit and just skip to the going out bit:





"I can't keep it to myself anymore, so I'll just tell you. I think that you're the coolest, most beautiful girl that I've ever met. I just wanted to let you know how I feel and I would love to take you out to dinner, if you would let me."





thats just my opinion, i think if you make it too lovey dovey at the early stages you will scare her a bit. im sure she will say yes to this gesture but IF she doesnt this way its not so bad. Good Luck... if shes a smart girl she will say yes.. dont forget to write your name.. haha :)