I'm writing a song and I'm stuck on ONE LINE! PLEASE!!!! Help ME!?

Well I was inspired by a moment I had with my Hubby today.... He was being so sweet and loving that all I could think of was how lucky and thankful I am to have him in my life. Then he broke the silence by saying, "Thank you Honey.... for being so wonderful to me." All I could think was HOW in the world can HE be thanking ME!? So I started writing this song... I have two verses and a beautiful tune so far.... but I'm stuck! On the last line of the chorus... it's the most important line thats got to pull it all together!


1st Verse- You hold my hand and thank me for being who I am You treasure me like no one else can


Always treating me like I'M the jewel


And you say you're a lucky man....





- But how can the sun thank the flowers


The trees aren't thanked by April Showers


And how can the moon thank the night.... When the moon is lighting the way?


--Fill In Here--





It needs to wrap it up and say that I should be thanking him. But it a really pretty way! LoL PLEASE HELP! THANX!

I'm writing a song and I'm stuck on ONE LINE! PLEASE!!!! Help ME!?
How...how can this be... how... how can this..... be........





that would be a good ending





second line... suggestion... The trees aren't thanked by THE April Showers!
Reply:well let me think?? ops my bad i hate english %26amp; i hate everything surrounds to that.But so far ur good.
Reply:Wish I could
Reply:He says hes the lucky one.


But what he doesn't realize is that I'm just as lucky.








and remember it doesn't have to rhyme it just has to sound good!
Reply:Your words of blessings on my soul are more than I can say...





How about that?





Sweet song by the way. =]
Reply:becuase I need you? lol


i am really good with poetry and songs but i guess tonight i suck!!!


Good luck tho that is REALLY good!
Reply:and why does the fire thank the smoke?

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